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The Poetry Nest Presents: A BROKEN HEARTS Challenge hosted by The Green Goddess!
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Category: Writing and Poetry
Green Heart Hugs my dearest Nesters!
It's another THUNDEROUS THURSDAY yet again with me your host

The Green Goddess
In keeping with the heart tugging on Thursdays, I have decided to go down a path we have all gone down before at one time or another in our lives and that is the path of --the broken heart. Now, before I continue I do want to say that my theme is not meant to get anybody down by any means at all. I just feel it's a theme we can all definitely relate to and tackle with tact and ease.

Whew! (wipes brow) Okay, that being said…shall we?

A BROKEN HEART.
We have all had one before at one time or another in our lives. We have all reached that point in our love/life stories where we have had to part with someone for some reason…sometimes reasons which make no sense…sometimes reasons which perfect sense. And soon enough, we feel the inevitable pain that comes with parting, a pain so strong- it literally feels like our hearts are breaking…

Today, I present a TWO PART CHALLENGE:
FIRST, I would like you to write a poem about any facet of heartbreak (maybe it wasn't a lover that broke your heart—tell me about that too!) If you already have one in your poetic treasure chests, then please do post it here- as many as you would like! Tell me how your heart was broken.
SECOND, Immediately after your poem, share a piece of advice on how to cope with a broken heart or tell us how you overcame yours. If any of us are really suffering from one right now, this is one of the best ways we can help them through it!



Here are a couple of mine:

Broken--
There I stood in the middle of our "used to be" love
In front of you—
You, who I still love so dearly…so much.
While you tell me it's over and done
You've moved on
"It's not you—it's me…"
Watching those words escape your lips
And feeling them burn me,
Branding my skin hard.
And then it begins, my descent into pain,
The torturing of my mind with your every memory
The constant ripping of my heart into pieces…
The tears that turn acidic and erode my cheeks.
And now I'm lying here in the darkness of my room
Wondering why I'm forgetting to breathe,
Wondering why my heart refuses to beat.
I am crushed in spirit,
Torn in my soul,
My heart--broken in two.
And I cannot imagine,
I can no longer see
My life without…you.
copyright 2008 JayneDS
And

Walking away
I watched you walk away...
slowly
becoming a mere fragment
of my used to be reality,
wanting to make you stay
yet knowing
each minute I let you linger,
I'd only die a little more.
Never knew I possessed
the courage
to finally end the madness
Never knew I'd been
shallow breathing
all this time.
And yet,
though it is done
For a time and a moment,
I'll still reach out to you,
though you will never see my outstretched arms
I'll still call your name,
though you will never hear my voice.
I'll love you still,
but you will never,
never know.
c 2008 Jayne DS
ADVICE: For me, my writing was therapeutic and vital to my healing. Sharing my pain with my best friend also helped me cope. I also found that I had to give myself time to grieve (i.e. looking at old pics, listening to sad songs, etc) But not long enough for it to consume all of my time. Eventually, time did it's thing—and my broken heart healed, but it's memory remains, its just not strong enough to harm me or make me sad anymore. I may revisit every now and then—but I never stay!

As always, do kindly leave comments of encouragement and praise for your fellow poets. We are here to inspire and cheer each other on!
I can't wait to read all of you!
GREEN HUGS TO YOU ALL!!
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